CREATING MY NEW SCRIPT – PART 3

on Saturday, June 21, 2014 ·

I am now on page 26.

I got to about page 16 and, after exhausting my initial energy with a new idea, I hesitated…and stopped moving forward.

I lost confidence, felt I didn’t have enough information to write a full script, hadn’t done my research enough to have enough content, so I went back and did some more research.

I found a bunch of stuff that gives me more scenes and more dialogue and it also reinvigorated me.

I’m usually someone who doesn’t talk about the project I’m writing – but maybe looking for approval – I began pitching the idea to friends and associates. Everyone loved it.

However, I began to notice something – my pitch ended with the first scene of my script.

The pitch worked and got people really excited about the idea but, in terms of writing a screenplay, it really wasn’t going to be the same thing.

The option of opening the script on the last scene of the pitch and then flashing back to the linear beginning is of no interest to me. I feel it’s an Anti-Dramatic structure. That realization helped me structure the dramatics of the information for the screenplay as a whole.

So I started rewriting – not moving forward- – but rewriting internally. Fleshing out the existing pages.

My page count went from 16 pages to 27 pages without moving forward in the story. I was making it more mature, finding a rhythm for the language, lots of rewriting dialogue.

I think I’m in a good place with this piece now and I look forward to tomorrow – when I start writing new pages again.

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