REVEALING A HIDDEN PROBLEM IN YOUR SCREENPLAY!

on Friday, November 16, 2012 ·

One of the issues I have with many screenplays I read is the lack of visual logic in scene description.

On some level, we see the movie in our minds when we read it, and when the scene description is illogical or impossible or awkward, it is registered and is one of the things that keep readers from totally being swept away with your writing. Subtle for sure, but real.

When a script is filmed, the director and cameraperson strive to develop shots that move – are cinematic and interesting as they isolate images in the environment.

Screenwriters do the same thing.

How?

By designing the scene description.

If you write a coherent and logical scene description it will never be seen. No one will ever say, “Nice scene description, here’s some money.” But what it will do is make your seduction of the reader all the smoother, more pleasurable.

And that’s the goal – to make the read good enough on every level that the reader puts it down feeling positive and wanting to write you a big fat check.

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